Decribing a person
Hi
My name is Vinh, I come from the South of Viet Nam and by next month I will finally be 18, that is the great milestone of my life. I’m now living in Ho Chi Minh city with my small and happy family including my parents, my sister, my brother and me. I’m a student and I’ve just started my first year at UEF. By the way my major is business management. Continuously, I’m going to describe myself for you.
Firstly, my appearance. My outlook isn’t perfect at all but I still love it. I’m slim and kind of tall. I have a short black hair and bright brown eyes. I used to be really handsome but maybe God don’t want to be unfair to other guys so that he gave me some acne.
That is something about my appearance. Now let go to the second part, my personality. I think I am an introvert because I don’t like to go out to join in some outside activity or contact with someone I don’t know. I just do that when I have to. Beside that I’m a person that is imaginative and moody. I also like to care for people in my life but I’m just good at hearing. About encouraging, I’m really bad at it. And there are not only good personalities but also bad personalities. The big one is that my ability to do something depends totally on my felling at that moment. It’s too hard to overcome.
Finally, there is something about my hobby. In everyday I love spending time investigating or study or even playing something in my own corner. Doing that make me feel completely peaceful and quiet in my soul. Moreover I’m interested in watching film and TV show about natural, sport or science in real life. I’m also into Art.
I’ve just tell you about some special things of me. You know it is too hard to talk all about me or you just in one letter so that I hope we can have more letters together in the future. I would love to receive you email, tell me about you and your life.
Best wishes,
Vinh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...mpletely peaceful and quiet in my soul. Moreover I'm interested in watching film an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, i think, kind of, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 24.0651302605 274% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42465753425 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55138080351 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558904109589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2738227071 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.6896551724 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5862068966 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34482758621 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0252318022566 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0127620833987 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046953959748 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0131253026879 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262506053759 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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