some people think that it is better for a child to grow up in the countryside than in the city, others disagree.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that, if children would be grew up in a rural area since childhood can have a better development of their mental and physical. Where it has numerous advantages impacts on offsprings rather than spend life in an urban area.
There are several reasons to favor a spending childhood in the countryside is beneficial for them. To begin with, in rural areas kids have no one restrictions in their positive activities like playing, visiting, etc. Means they become free minded to do anything whatever they want. Which will be directed adds new life in physical development. Next, the countryside atmosphere is free of pollution which is another plus point for the child. As they breathing cool air and owing to vegetation in the area can lead to widespread our thoughts and mental progress.
Furthermore, in rural area, they are looked after by their grandparents, who are always staying at home. So, they can learn many positive things in their earlier life as, moral beliefs of cultural and social, better human life aspects and so on. Thus, by doing these great steps in childhood time especially in the rural area will surely be a healthy improvement in their life.
However, some individuals are against that, where they think to spend their childhood in city areas. In which a child would be get sufficient basic facilities like electricity, water, food, etc. As well as they may able to get a wide range of sports so, they have physical development as well. Second, most the parents are live in an urban region, hence people do not want to leave their children alone or they may not get return back to the village. Because they are too busy in their life as well.
By the way of conclusion, every parent looks forward to better development of their loved ones in all the aspects, and for that countryside, the region is a better place to compare to the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...velopment of their mental and physical. Where it has numerous advantages impacts on o...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minded doing'.
Suggestion: minded doing
..., visiting, etc. Means they become free minded to do anything whatever they want. Which will...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nded to do anything whatever they want. Which will be directed adds new life in physi...
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...heir children alone or they may not get return back to the village. Because they are too bu...
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Line 17, column 54, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to bettering', 'to welling'.
Suggestion: to bettering; to welling
... conclusion, every parent looks forward to better development of their loved ones in all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, as well as, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8262195122 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58273098304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.686446886 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939473629288 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325906999527 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394488965048 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603397146873 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313461196371 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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