Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than other people do.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of enjoying life at different age periods. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely disagree with the following statement. It is my firm belief that people can enjoy life at any stages of life for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, enjoying life depends on both physical and mental health. As long as you are physically fit, you have the ability to taste the life perfectly. Moreover, mental health is also important as if you are mentally happy then you will definitely enjoy your time despite the ups and downs of life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I remember when I was in my school period, I watched my grandfather enjoyed his life to the fullest. He always preferred to read new books and whenever he got his favourite writers books he jumped like a kid. Furthermore, he also liked to make new friends and participate in fancy get together parties. As a result, my highly energetic grandfather stayed mentally strong and healthy all his time period. For this reason, it is necessary to enjoy life no matter at what stage you are.
Secondly, celebrating life is highly associated with the thirst to explore the unknown universe. People feel attracted to travel new places and satisfy their hunger. This travelling habit does not require age limits. Drawing from my own experience, my father's favourite hobby is travelling, and he likes to visit the unknown areas. Moreover, at vacation, he tends to arrange tour, and at the same time feels excited to learn something new. His thirst of exploring and gaining knowledge is never hampered by his age. It's certainly clear to see why enjoying life depends on your eagerness to discover the world.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that age limits does not block the desire of enjoying life. This is because as long as a person is physically and mentally stable and eagerly waiting to explore the world, he/she can enjoy life with full energy.
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- TPO 01 task 1 83
- TPO 22 Task 2 3
- TOEFL Official Guide - Practice Test 2 - Integrated Writing - Professors on TV 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7972972973 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56988373483 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2671604636 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5238095238 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190990671808 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608543980425 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546332379468 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128621238206 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506220062983 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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