The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the terms of proportion of water which expand into six various sectors of the globe for several purposes.
In overall, Central Asia and Africa is constitute a major for spending water on husbandry where Europe and North America for industrial purposes. Whilst, least amount of water is used for domestic use. However, a significant disparity can be noticed in all areas over the periods.
It can be seen from the information that Central Asia is more popular for expanding water on farming which accounts at 88% followed by Africa and South East experiences at more than a four fifths. Similarly, more than a seven in ten amount of water of the total percentage is used by South America for agriculture purposes. Even though, a difference of 6%can be observers in North America ( 39% ) as well as Europe ( 32% ) which utilise water on husbandry.
The charts further prove that Europe attained a higher figure of spending water upon industrial purposes at more than a half while Less than a half (48% ) water is used by North America for same purpose. Interestingly, the percentage of water who expand on industrial use by South East Asia, South America, Africa and Central Asia is find at 12%, 10%, 7% and 5% respectively. Furthermore, Central Asia as well as South East Asia remains relatively constant at 5% who utilise water on Domestic use. Apart from this, the proportion of South America ( 19% ) , Europe ( 15% ) and North America ( 13% ) is less than a fifth for spending water upon domestic purposes. Lastly, Africa who use 2% more water on domestic at 7% rather than Central Asia and South East Asia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, similarly, so, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88928571429 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61096972468 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460714285714 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4185494016 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181008660405 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880701633902 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426016203224 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137071750667 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241306000342 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.