In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they by punished?
Nowadays, the biggest problem in society is a crime where it is becoming controversial as well as the main expected of this happen are children and teenagers. In this chance this essay will discuss about this case.
On the one side, the tendency of younger is active activity, therefore they are more doing kinds of experiences then because of the hyper active, without positive thinking they commit an offence. For example, in environment of students, most of them socialize in several groups base on their comfortable, their come from even their status of social. As a consequence of this matter, many crimes which are happen caused of it, such as a peer pressure with hard bullying and others offences. As result, the teenagers have a freedom to going anything that are present a negative effects. In conclusion, the main offender of delinquency is the younger, therefore it is always increasing in every moment.
On the other side, it is due to by the development of the number of teenager and children. Basically the amount of younger is higher than the older subsequently should be given laws of this case to avoid the negative impacts which will happen. Firstly, the rule should be exist for younger who is committing an offence such as bullying is given punishment that is considering in a trial. Secondly, the punishment obligatory suitable with the crimes which they did, where the parameter of it, when present a damage to another people. Finally, the age should be consider also because some moment there is a reflex or inadvertent factor.
To sum up, base on my point of view, the younger have a huge role in society for this reason, they have a potential to commit several offences. I agree with the statement above
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...offences. As result, the teenagers have a freedom to going anything that are present a ne...
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Message: Did you mean 'existed'?
Suggestion: existed
...ill happen. Firstly, the rule should be exist for younger who is committing an offenc...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...where the parameter of it, when present a damage to another people. Finally, the age sho...
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...ther people. Finally, the age should be consider also because some moment there is a ref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66793302009 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2925308212 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246111493764 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724739053386 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449643062536 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137984603877 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369349717422 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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