"The best preparation for life or a career is not learning to be competitive, but learning to be cooperative."
Life is full of competition. A man faces different types of competition over is whole life in different life stages. If a person is not competitive, he or she can never attain success in his career. Besides, competition you must have to be cooperative other ways you will become legging behind because, no one ever success in life without cooperation.
As for example, if you are not cooperative other people don’t share anything with you. Imagine you are a fist boy or girl in the class, which you gain, by being competitive with others but somehow when you become ill and unable to go to in your school for some days, then, if you are not cooperative, your friends they don’t share any information with you which you would missed. In the job sectors, you colleagues are your main competitor but also they are your cooperator because, in job sector you don’t understand every odds and ends of your sectors and you must need help of your colleagues if you are not cooperative they do not help you either.
However, you may attain your personal success by learning competition but, when you want to be change a whole nation or a large group of people you have to be cooperative. Whenever any morbid prevalent whole nation or region we can save us by maintaining safety but, every people of the nation may not accustomed with those safety measure. When you want to make them safe, you have to be cooperative, other ways this morbid also impacted you one day and there will be nothing to competitive.
Indeed, to attaining success in your whole life or career you have to learn competitiveness beside cooperation. Without cooperation you may not be able to creep in the highest apogee of success. If you want to survive in society or anything else you must have to be cooperative. By maintaining proper cooperation and competition with your contemporaries, you will success in your life and career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
...ny information with you which you would missed. In the job sectors, you colleagues are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80060422961 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80785439978 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465256797583 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7062863969 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140894813216 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764607957612 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478391081803 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119038411346 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498491606047 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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