The charts show that the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shows below.
The chart shows that how the number of Japanese tourists who traveled abroad, changed over one decade between 1985 and 1995. More over, the graph illustrates that the percentage coming to Australia by japan’s tourist market had upward trend during this decade.
It is clear from the data given in the chart that the number of traveling abroad was more than doubled where increased from 4.5 millions in 1985 to 11 millions in 1990. Since then, apart from a slight drop to 10.5 millions in the following year, there was a steady increase to almost 15.8 millions in 1995.
Furthermore, the figures...
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Sentence: Furthermore, the figures from the graph show that Australia's share of japan's tourist market dramatically rose to 4.8 percent and after a even falls and rise, markedly increased to just over 6 in 1993.
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