Example Letter: Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter:
– Your reason for writing
– What you would like to happen
– A nice, respectful style
Hello shehzad,
I hope you're well
I am writing to express my worries which i took last night due to barking of your small dog.
Actually, he barks full day and night in continues manner which is very unpeacfull and unpleasant for us. In addition to, his place is very near to me bedroom, around 50 meter for away.For which i feel more annoying.
Now, i request you to change his place to other side of your home or bring another dog so i think as together they will not bark more. you remember, last year i was also keeping cat & dog in my house, because i love to keep animals. due to this reason i have move them to my formhouse .
I also request to make a plan on this waekend to visit my formhouse which is nearby and nice place.we will sit over there and will take tea .
Appreaciate your understanding and waiting for kind responce.
Regards,
Musa
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-04 | Muhammad Musa | 86 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Hello shehzad, I hope youre well I am writing to express my worri...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... am writing to express my worries which i took last night due to barking of your ...
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Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...e is very near to me bedroom, around 50 meter for away.For which i feel more annoying...
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Line 11, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...to me bedroom, around 50 meter for away.For which i feel more annoying. Now...
^^^
Line 11, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oom, around 50 meter for away.For which i feel more annoying. Now, i requ...
^
Line 17, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hich i feel more annoying. Now, i request you to change his place to othe...
^
Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other side of your home or bring another dog so i think as together they will not...
^^
Line 17, column 92, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e of your home or bring another dog so i think as together they will not bark mo...
^
Line 17, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...nk as together they will not bark more. you remember, last year i was also keeping ...
^^^
Line 17, column 161, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... not bark more. you remember, last year i was also keeping cat & dog in my house,...
^
Line 17, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was also keeping cat & dog in my house, because i love to keep animals. due to t...
^^
Line 17, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...keeping cat & dog in my house, because i love to keep animals. due to this reaso...
^
Line 17, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...house, because i love to keep animals. due to this reason i have move them to my f...
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Line 17, column 262, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'moved'.
Suggestion: moved
...keep animals. due to this reason i have move them to my formhouse . I also ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... reason i have move them to my formhouse . I also request to make a plan ...
^^
Line 23, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...we will sit over there and will take tea . Appreaciate your understandin...
^^
Line 23, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will sit over there and will take tea . Appreaciate your understanding and waiti...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 13, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...d will take tea . Appreaciate your understanding and waiting for kind resp...
^^^^
Line 29, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...standing and waiting for kind responce. Regards, Musa
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so, well, as to, i feel, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58125 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36321375546 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1647840346 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231687831549 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880937830886 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872098141175 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12612943269 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810797459684 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.