The two graph show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the terms of percentage of five major sources (oil, natural gas, coal, hydroelectric power and nuclear power) of energy production which was in one decades in the America during 1980 and 1990.
In overall, oil constituted a major for generated power since hydroelectric power produced least energy. However, there were lots of transformation can be noticed in all energy sources over the periods.
It can be seen from the information that oil which was composed of 42% in 1980 and fell to a third between 1990 of the total energy, which was expect a third of the total contribution,though it was still the highest over the period of decades. Likewise, nuclear power which accounted for 5% of the USA’s energy from 1980 and experienced a two-fold increase to one in ten at the last year in specific region.
The charts further prove that contribution of hydroelectric power remained constant in both years at 5%. In contrast, energy contribution from coal was 22% in 1980 and experienced a growth of 5% from the end of the period. Lastly, natural gas that comprised of almost a little more than a quarter remained relatively stable during the given time periods in the USA.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one decade', 'a decade', or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: one decade; a decade; decades
...power of energy production which was in one decades in the America during 1980 and 1990. ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'produced the least'.
Suggestion: produced the least
...nerated power since hydroelectric power produced least energy. However, there were lots of tra...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expected'.
Suggestion: expected
...een 1990 of the total energy, which was expect a third of the total contribution,thoug...
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Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , though
...expect a third of the total contribution,though it was still the highest over the perio...
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Line 13, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stable during the given time periods in the USA.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, likewise, so, still, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98550724638 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92157521969 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541062801932 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7578469814 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115433744052 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526052899485 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414113506243 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726017069188 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267769000462 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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