You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in regards to my room that I have been renting for the past two months at Northcote College.
The room itself is great as it is spacious and comfortable and reasonably priced which I find hard to find in this region. In the beginning, I rented this room alone but about one month ago they send another student to share the room with me.
She was very nice and quiet in the beginning, however, she now likes to party a lot. She often arrives in the room in the early mornings or at midnight, which is waking me up. I cannot sleep properly and I find it really hard to live like that. It affects my studies as well because I am so tired all the time.
I would be happy to rent a room by myself or have another roommate who would be more interested in studies than parties.
Yours faithfully,
Marcell Bonwell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regards to my room that I have been renting for th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38036809816 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2753045515 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9412027027 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235503693627 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784603500891 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554369061738 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123715121324 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670002775332 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.