The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group was working in certain sectors in the U k in 1998 and 2006.

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The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group was working in certain sectors in the U k in 1998 and 2006.

The table compares the count of folks of different age group employed in specific sectors in the U k in 2 years.

overall, the table reveals that dissimilar age group of working in dissimilar ages and the data has been given in digits and four sectors are compared by different age group.

In details, the hotel and catering in year of 1998 between 18 to 65 was decreasing rapidly from 25,765 to 4300 and apart from that in year of 2006 it was enhancing under the age of 18 to 45 but after some time it decreased 12000 to 75,44 respectively. after, the employed in building sector in between two years 1998 to 2006 it declined in dissimilar ages instantly with wide fluctuation.

Meanwhile, the some proponents in technology in the year of 1998 were rising in between ages of 18 to 25 but afterwards, it declined about 800 and markedly in the year of 2006 the service of workers also decreased respectively 19,352.Later on, in education sector the workers in between two years were uplifting under age group of 18 to 36 but after some days it declined totally 43,647 and after 8 years it was increasing rapidly with wide fluctuation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... was enhancing under the age of 18 to 45 but after some time it decreased 12000 t...
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... decreased 12000 to 75,44 respectively. after, the employed in building sector in bet...
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... decreased 12000 to 75,44 respectively. after, the employed in building sector in bet...
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...tor in between two years 1998 to 2006 it declined in dissimilar ages instantly w...
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...ween two years 1998 to 2006 it declined in dissimilar ages instantly with wide f...
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...ith wide fluctuation. Meanwhile, the some proponents in technology in the year of...
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...kers also decreased respectively 19,352.Later on, in education sector the workers in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64356435644 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69260060715 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480198019802 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.003089392 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.6 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258238298102 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169123193347 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534284368428 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185134185884 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506569285011 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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