The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group was working in certain sectors in the U k in 1998 and 2006.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group was working in certain sectors in the U k in 1998 and 2006.

The table compares the count of folks of different age group employed in specific sectors in the U k in 2 years.

overall, the table reveals that dissimilar age group of working in dissimilar ages and the data has been given in digits and four sectors have been compared by different age group.

In details, the hotel and catering in year of 1998 from 18 to 65 decreased rapidly from 25,765 to 4300 and apart from that in the year 2006, it enhanced among the age group 18 to 45, but after sometime, it decreased from 12000 to 7544. The number of people, employed in building sector in a time frame of two years from 1998 to 2006, decreased in dissimilar ages instantly with wide fluctuations.

Meanwhile, the number of individuals in technology in the year 1998 were rising in between ages of 18 to 25 but thereafter, it declined by 800 and markedly in the year of 2006 the service of workers also decreased respectively 19,352. Later on, in education sector the workers in between two years uplifted under age group of 18 to 36 but after some days, it declined to 43,647 and after 8 years, it increased rapidly with wide fluctuations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59803921569 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60128820156 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3451906854 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264476083309 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15006693668 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587014811892 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178999773796 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409148666923 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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