A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you but you can’t do so.
• Tell her the reasons for that
• Apologize to her
• Make alternative arrangements
Dear Eva,
hope this letter finds you well. In your last letter you tell me that you wish to visit Bangladesh next month from 10th november to 28th november and want so stay at my place.
I am very sorry to tell you that, next month I have seminar at london , which fixed last week. For this reason i have to out of country from november 1st to rest of the month. I am extremely sorry that I did not stay here for your hospitality. the seminar is very essential for my work and career.
But you do not have to worried about it, because I made an alternative arrangement for you. last time when you visit Bangladesh you meet my friend sumaiya. Fortunately, sumaiya's parent would go to their home town to visit sumaiya's grandparents for the november month. As a result, her home is totally free and very suitable for you to stay. when I tell her about you he is laughing with joy and assure me that she can take good care of you.
hope you will understand the situation. I am looking forward to answer from you.
From Love,
Esha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Eva, hope this letter finds you well. In your...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat, next month I have seminar at london , which fixed last week. For this reason ...
^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...did not stay here for your hospitality. the seminar is very essential for my work a...
^^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...ade an alternative arrangement for you. last time when you visit Bangladesh you meet...
^^^^
Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...free and very suitable for you to stay. when I tell her about you he is laughing wit...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...e that she can take good care of you. hope you will understand the situation. I am...
^^^^
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to answering'.
Suggestion: to answering
...and the situation. I am looking forward to answer from you. From Love, Esha
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to answer from you. From Love, Esha
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37113402062 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2956724001 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9390363163 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5714285714 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447870487128 0.216113520407 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142777118068 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748451856676 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245699973589 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086734329085 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.