Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.
Write to your friend. In your letter
congratulate your friend
tell her when you will be returning home
ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby
Dear Sara,
I am truly delighted by the news! Nothing is more refreshing than bringing hope to this world and newborns are the symbol of hopes. Please accept my deepest congratulations for your newborn child. I wish the baby the best of the best.
As you know, unfortunately I am right now on a business trip. Had I known your baby is going to be born one week early, I would not have volunteered for the mission. Anyway, no one could have predicted the exact time of birth. Hopefully, we can finalize the deal by tomorrow and our new customer will sign the contract by the end of the week. I am going to postpone all the sightseeing I had planned before and fly back home as soon as I am finished here. Hence, I will be home next week.
Since I will be back after the weekend, I was wondering whether it is okay if I come by your house after work. Babies are my soft spot and I want to see the tiny miracle of yours as soon as possible. Please let me know if Tuesday evening is convenient for you too.
Looking forward to seeing you
Behnaz Yousefi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, I am truly delighted by the news! Nothin...
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Line 9, column 490, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... here. Hence, I will be home next week. Since I will be back after the weekend, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, hence, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3631840796 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42503505744 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6866872727 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4615384615 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244487344321 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775802808725 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050610674426 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135677473047 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470171230155 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.