You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found that you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing with regard to some of my belongings which I had left at your hotel.
I am one of the participants in the seminar held at your hotel the previous week. After returning home, I noticed that I have forgotten to bring some important documents. because I was in a hurry to get my flight on time, I did not go back to my room and left the hotel from the meeting hall. So, I guess that they will be somewhere in the conference room.
These papers are crucial for me because not only are they the original drafts of my essay and I have written all the details there, but also i have not published their in any journals yet. Hence, it is vital for me both professionally and financially to find them before anyone abuses them.
I would be extremely grateful if you could ask your staff to check the meeting hall. Provided that they find them, please give me a favor and keep them, I will come by myself to get my papers. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.
I look forward to receiving your response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...tten to bring some important documents. because I was in a hurry to get my flight on ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, i guess, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39195979899 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46423881094 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8931895885 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228231487008 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788627505955 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589767008943 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112544824928 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747336932757 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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