Leadership & Influence Question
Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.
(Minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)
I was born in Kolkata but raised in the northeast. So, from the very beginning I had to mingle with people of a different culture, learn their ways and adapt with them. I was introduced to the elements of leadership at a tender age. I was the class monitor during my school days and had to manage student grievances by reporting the class teacher and fulfil class resources like chalk, duster and chart papers from school repositories. I see leadership as something that you earn when you prioritize others interest in place of yours. This belief led me to donate blood in voluntary blood donation camp organised by State Blood Transfusion Council, West Bengal.
My present job in Bank of Maharashtra from 2015 till date, has taught me a lot about working in a group and taking care of each other. Being a member of All India Bank Employees Association (AIBEA) I took an active part in fighting for the rights of security guards, who were governed by a third-party security agency and served our bank. To protest against their layoffs, we observed strikes. This led to deduction of our salaries for the respective strike days, but we held our ground.
Besides, this I was also enrolled in Arena Animation Shyambazar for learning 2D and 3D design during the year 2016 -17. This is when I got an opportunity to represent my centre in Orbit Live 2017, which is an annual animation industry event held in Mumbai where delegates from several countries attended. I competed in the 3D Modeling category with two other students in my team from Mumbai. All the students were grouped in teams of three and the task required teamwork for completion. We had to divide the task in smaller sections and prioritize how much time we should spend to complete each section. The task needed dexterity with computer graphics software, co-operation amongst members, decision-making for task execution and self-evaluation. Co-operation amongst members phase had its hurdles, but I managed and learned to interact with people of a different ethnicity in the process, and together we achieved a common goal.
During my college days I presented several papers and had done projects as a part of the curriculum tasks. Often these activities were performed in groups of five or six members. In several such situations I established an understanding with my teammates and eventually led them towards task completion with good results. Following this interest, I authored several papers during 2015-19, which included a paper entitled ‘Gamification: a smart rejoinder to workforce happiness through discretionary effort’. The paper was co-authored by two more fellows, but I got the opportunity to present it amongst specialized audiences in the International HR Conference on HR Trends 2030 organised by Indian Institute of Social Welfare and Business Management. The conference was chaired by several dignitaries from the industry and the academic world. My paper was placed with four other papers under the theme HR Analytics, Artificial Intelligence & Advanced Modeling in HR. During my presentation I justified to my learned audience, the purpose of my paper and its outcome through the conclusion. The chairperson further validated my point and gave valuable feedback.
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- Leadership & Influence QuestionChevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to suppor 78
- Leadership & Influence QuestionChevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to suppor 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2741.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 530.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17169811321 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98175346057 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 176.041082164 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567924528302 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6638552743 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.423076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26923076923 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0553136150634 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171734849394 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239621346469 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390373110333 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022082170207 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 78.4519038076 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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