People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days. Discuss the causes of this situation and suggest some possible solutions.
There is no doubt that people in this contemporary world are becoming more lethargic and inactive as compared to the people in the past. This is due to the lack of exercise in sedentary lives, however, this issue can be combated by scheduling a fixed time for physical activities.
Of the various factors responsible for the un-healthiness of people in these modern times, the crucial one is the absence of workout in busy work-life. This is because, in order to earn the livelihood an individual have to work for longer hours, which, in turn, leaves a little/no time to engage in any physical workout, as a consequence, they get prone to various diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure, stress, and muscular strains. For instance, the employees in metropolitan cities are working on an average of 10 hours every day excluding the travelling times which clearly signifies that they do not get sufficient time for a workout, due to this most of them are suffering from obesity. In stark contrast, people in olden times were mostly engaged in manual activities such as farming, fishing and knitting, and the life was rather slow, which helped them to live a healthy and stress-free life.
Nevertheless, this problem can be resolved by including a fixed and regular time to exercise every day. The reason for this is it rejuvenates the mind and proliferates the level of immunity in the body to fight with the diseases, as a result, an individual leads a disease-free life. To exemplify, a medical study has proved that performing 20 minutes of yoga each day can heal the varied health issues related to respiration, digestion and many other. Therefore, engaging oneself in physical activities such as yoga, sports, cardio and walk, is quintessential to remain fit and active.
In conclusion, although the busy lifestyle of modern people has made them unhealthy, to acquire a healthy life inclusion of regular physical exercise is extremely important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 442, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...s related to respiration, digestion and many other. Therefore, engaging oneself in physica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06153846154 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86946132297 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.162467342 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.545454545 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138225562602 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577610115293 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450011112651 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890966989728 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386602371892 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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