The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
The world is growing in technology,Social life,cultures what not in every field it is showing progression. Although we are developing in the running world,crime rate is also increasing in huge scale. Since last two years crime rate is increased 5% than the earlier. it's so sad that majority of people in enhancing crime rate are younger people.
I believe the situation exist purely lack of parenting skills, The parents are not taking there children life seriously and not teaching them basic discipline and life skills, because of this young people are going in short cuts and ruining their lifes.Even though it makes heart heavy, we need to agree 10% of the crime in the world is done by people under 15.
I need to explain you the live crime i have seen,that's saturday june 12th some where around 5 pm i was walking in little crowded area. The are is full of young people and gangsters i realised that am in wrong place shouldn't be their long so, thought of moving from there and booked the cab. In the mean time few young people came near me and asked photograph, I wondered i am not celebrity why these are coming to me and asking for photo, i replied sorry i got to go. Then the few people warned me not to go from there and asked me to sit on lap. I was not left with another option, i had to do it. They took all my money and left me.
I feel many from this generation, Don't know the value of money.They want to earn in shortcuts and finally behind the bars, some young are educating and being great social and economic life in society, this problem exists because of parents are not showing right directions to there childs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, i feel, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44671207951 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8942027851 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19763994679 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593019203938 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525238450211 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112071652863 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579185612582 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.