The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
We are living in the generation were machine are ruling the world. they are faster and smarter than man power. Although, humans completely depend on machines for their work. However, it is man who invented the machines and I would say that machines are only tools of human minds. Because, humans are the one who handles and instructs the machines to run accordingly. so, for a machine to show its potential it needs the man power to innovate and operate it efficiently. By this, I would say that the master minds of humans are the reason for effective working of the machines.
Firstly, machines serves for the human purpose and so it can said be that machines are greater. however, a man is the one who innovates and creates machine. without man no machine can operate. for example, any modern devices such as smart phones are fully programmed and organised into a entire thing by humans. and these machines serves for the purpose of human. they always do what a human wants to do and not more than that. If any updates of a machine is to be made, then a developer remodels and recreates a new machine as he thinks from his own mind.
In addition to this, still today there is no machine to do decision making of its own, which is the only superior quality a human has. For instance, a Robot is given all the features as a human body . but it cannot be equal to a human in any way. Since a machine mind has no feelings and emotions, it is not possible for a machine to think and act as a human. Thereby, humans are always identical and supercilious than any machine.
Moreover, A diagnosis of a disease can be made using machine but only a human mind is capable to treat the disease. likewise, from small electrical devices to wireless machines, all comes under the inventions made from human minds. Eventhough machines are automated and completes work earlier they are only controlled by humans. this clearly shows, any machine is a human dependant one more than a human dependents on machine. furthermore, many inventions of machines and latest versions are growing now. but, The idea of driverless cars are not encouraged due to the safety of humans. this explicit that machines are something which has limitations.
To sum up everything, I strongly agree with the claim that machines are created and controlled by the minds of human beings. Therefore, humans are undoubtedly always superior to any machines. they are using the machines as a tools for their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57591578723 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7432598321 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8620689655 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72413793103 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538473754033 0.243740707755 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160086711471 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100526452274 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362890277887 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280202584329 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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