Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives.
What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?
Although people’s life become more and more convenient and comfortable than it used to be in the past, many people have a problem of keeping balance between their work and daily life. Some youngsters struggle in finding job and feel stressful when go and back from workplace to home. There are several reasons for this phenomenon but having no simple measures could do to solve it.
For many people, the continuous increasing in life cost is the main reason for breaking up the balance between life and work. Many new workers have to work for longer time so that they can shoulder the high life cost in big city such as New York or London. Also, even the most affluent countries may have possibility of losing job, so to keep their jobs, people are compelled to work longer hours which it used to spend on their family. Moreover, in some company, employees have to bear pressure that comes from their bosses. Some employers like to push their workers work harder and longer but ignore their life quality and therefore, those workers have to stay in company frequently. To those who with secure jobs, some of them still unsatisfied with what they have and they always ensue behind the promotions and better salaries, which spend less time in their life.
It not easy to solve the problem. For some workaholics themselves, they should put work and salary into lower level in their mind and improve their relationship with others around them. The government also has things to do, which to limit working hours so that the basic life time could be ensured.
Overall, people should keep balance between work and life because it could help them to keep healthy and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83793103448 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30745058035 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5884391347 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312521541624 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107667071675 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510286068869 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183511069218 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622918284231 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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