Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:-
1. Give details of the job.
2. Explain why it is important to you.
3. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mrs. Collingwood,
I have written down this letter to request you for a reference required for the job application I am going to submit soon.
The particulars of the job quite align with my field of study in business management and logistics. ABC Limited is currently hiring for the position of ‘shipping and warehousing service manager’ which I believe fully comply with my area of expertise.
This position involves maintaining stock inventory levels, warehouse storage concept and maintaining safety procedures at the workplace. Moreover, while pursuing my management course in logistics, I used to visit warehouses for practical experience, and I believe this field interests me a lot. In addition, pay rates are relatively higher in logistics as compared to other management roles.
Would you kindly consider writing me a genuine reference about your experience with me? You can also mention my overall performance throughout 2 academic years and practical knowledge I gained under your directions.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Karan Galati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65680473373 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09736043741 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704142011834 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5900549881 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112114588824 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425254659311 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452874396393 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478643067577 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501596544407 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 8.71597938144 175% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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