Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and suppo

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Subjects studied during college play an integral path in our careers . S...
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...ge play an integral path in our careers . Since the kind of subjects you select ...
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... play an integral path in our careers . Since the kind of subjects you select can de...
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... . Since the kind of subjects you select can define your success in the future . ...
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...t can define your success in the future . It should be the responsibility of the ...
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... of the student to select these subjects Educational institutes should not be hel...
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...tutes should not be held responsible for students selecting subjects in which t...
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...onsible for students selecting subjects in which they are less likely to succee...
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...ble for students selecting subjects in which they are less likely to succeed ...
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...ly to succeed Today, colleges offer hundreds of subject to students which we...
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... the college to predict which courses or subjects have better opportunities that ...
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... have better opportunities that the rest . One such example, is social media and ...
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...r opportunities that the rest . One such example, is social media and marketing w...
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...e to social media platforms like twitter instagram etc. Secondly, large numbe...
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... media platforms like twitter instagram etc. Secondly, large number of studen...
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... platforms like twitter instagram etc. Secondly, large number of students atten...
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...tudent and help them pick the right path . Also a college should not stop a stude...
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...nt and help them pick the right path . Also a college should not stop a student fro...
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...p a student from pursuing their interest even if they are not likely to succeed. ...
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...ceed despite what other the people think . However, if a student is confused a...
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... other the people think . However, if a student is confused and wishes to seek...
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...idance from the college. It will be the colleges responsibility to help him select a pat...
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... a path which he is likely to succeed in . In conclusion , colleges should no...
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...ikely to succeed in . In conclusion , colleges should not be held responsible...
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... colleges should not be held responsible for students selecting subjects which th...
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...ssible to keep track of all subjects and the career opportunities they lead to . ...
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...d the career opportunities they lead to . Also it very difficult to counsel every...
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...the career opportunities they lead to . Also it very difficult to counsel every stud...
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... may not like to be forced in to doing a subject they are not passionate about bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7288801933 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483974358974 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7050946007 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240384288152 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814799342942 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631154783572 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151123780053 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328150958668 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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