do you agree or disagree with the following statement? is it more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends?
A controversial question which is often raised regarding friendship is whether or not making new friends is less important than keeping the old ones? I personally hold the viewpoint that holding on to old friends due to some reasons is of a higher importance. In the following paragraphs my reasons are demonstrated.
Firstly, it is generally agreed that people are more convenient with their fellows, meaning in terms of friendship one individual based on what we call familiarity could have more comfort and the sense of belonging when the reunite with their old friends. To depict this idea further, old friends are more known to us, we are well aware of each other moralities and tempers and the time spent together led to loyalty and allegiance which you mostly can not find in new folks. A personal example of this claim is that I myself am much more comfortable when I hang around with my old friend and I can be myself, no necessity of pretending what I am not.
Secondly, when it comes to compassion and better advising old friends have shown a better promise, to shed light upon this assumption, imagine a person whom you have a lifetime friendship with, in this period many incidents and memories were made which have created a strong bond between them ,therefore, when we encounter a complexity and a quarrel we can depend on their assistance which led to this idiom that says a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Finally, In spite of making new friends which would be fair to say they usually broaden our horizons and they reregulate our path, old friends encourage us to be straight to our cause. moreover, according to the awareness they have on our weak points and strong point they know better than any stranger that in which path we can perform better seeing us from a better secured and sympathetic position outside.
In conclusion, based on aforementioned reasons above one could realize that, although it can be in our benefit to make new friendships, it is more vital to keep our old friendships due to the loyalty, compassion and clearer future we can get from old fellowships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...is often raised regarding friendship is whether or not making new friends is less important th...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...comfort and the sense of belonging when the reunite with their old friends. To depict this ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... have created a strong bond between them ,therefore, when we encounter a complexit...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...courage us to be straight to our cause. moreover, according to the awareness they have o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78904109589 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70808579158 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.064489417 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.8 100.406767564 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 20.6045352989 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305602627515 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12860577563 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679156647187 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172800043839 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06746357802 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.