summarize the point made in the lecture ,being sure to explain how they are oppose the specific points made in the reading passage .
According to the lecture, no one get benefited when the professors appear on the tv. The professor in the lecture contradict information mention in the reading passage. She refutes all the benefits which are mention in the passage.
First of all, the professor refuses that, the professors get benefited after appear on the tv. According to the reading passage professors get more audience than the university students. Moreover they appreciated by many of people from the world when they appear on the tv. However this is not true according to the lecture. It is not good for professors image. They will not consider as scholar. They will not get invitation from any conference because they are not serious about their own work. Futhermore they will not get money to do the research.
Secondly ,according to the reading passage the university get publicity and the donation as well as the more admission when there professors appear on the tv.This fact is not true because professors should spend their lot of time to prepare for the tv interview so that they are not getting time to talk with their studens and also not get time to do research.
Lastly,reading passage talk about public who get benefited when professors gives konwledge. However this again not true beacuse chennel only wnat the acedic titrl to attract the public . This type of program not really provide any intellcual. Public can get it from internet also. So there is no point of benefit to public.
Finally the professor in the lecture refutes all the benefit which are mention in the reading passage. On one get benefited from professors appears on the TV.
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Sentence: The professor in the lecture contradict information mention in the reading passage.
Description: The fragment lecture contradict information is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace contradict with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
which are mention in the passage.
which are mentioned in the passage.
Sentence: First of all, the professor refuses that, the professors get benefited after appear on the tv.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to after and appear
Sentence: It is not good for professors image.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to professors and image
Sentence: Secondly ,according to the reading passage the university get publicity and the donation as well as the more admission when there professors appear on the tv.This fact is not true because professors should spend their lot of time to prepare for the tv interview so that they are not getting time to talk with their studens and also not get time to do research.
Description: The fragment university get publicity is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Lastly,reading passage talk about public who get benefited when professors gives konwledge.
Description: The fragment professors gives konwledge is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace gives with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: On one get benefited from professors appears on the TV.
Description: A numeral, cardinal is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to one and get
Sentence: Secondly ,according to the reading passage the university get publicity and the donation as well as the more admission when there professors appear on the tv.This fact is not true because professors should spend their lot of time to prepare for the tv interview so that they are not getting time to talk with their studens and also not get time to do research.
Error: studens Suggestion: student
Sentence: Lastly,reading passage talk about public who get benefited when professors gives konwledge.
Error: konwledge Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: However this again not true beacuse chennel only wnat the acedic titrl to attract the public .
Error: acedic Suggestion: acidic
Error: wnat Suggestion: what
Error: titrl Suggestion: tire
Error: beacuse Suggestion: because
Error: chennel Suggestion: channel
Sentence: This type of program not really provide any intellcual.
Error: intellcual Suggestion: intellectual
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No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 19 12
No. of Words: 278 250
No. of Characters: 1326 1200
No. of Different Words: 123 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.77 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.468 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.632 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.372 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4