Many people believe that greed, or the desire to have more wealth than other people have, is a bad characteristic; people who are greedy are often considered selfish or unkind. However, some people argue that greed is actually a good characteristic for a person to have because greedy people will work harder than others to become successful. Do you believe that greed can be a good characteristic? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Someone has rightly said that greed can lead to a destruction a person hilmself and that of those surrounding him. Greed is a bad characteristic and in no way should be considered as good characteristic.
Greedy person may work harder to become successful, but greedy person are much concerned about acquiring wealth and achieving success rather than the path they follow to achieve success. They don't care how they achieve success they just want to become successful. This can have effect on other people life. For example, there are businessmen who traps innocent poor people in traps and made them work more and pay less. There are lot of industrialist who have installed cheap chimneys that affects environment harmfully.
Moreover, Greedy people are never satisfied they want even more and more. Greedy people are never internally satisfied. So, by working hard they are achieving success and materilaistic things, but it do no benefit to their inner satisfaction. For example, we have many succesful people becoming depressed and leaving their job or business to go in rehab.
Furthermore, Greedy people can fall to traps, can fall prey to cheats. Greedy people want to achieve wealth and success as fast as they can in whichever way. Sometimes they are in a hurry and in greed to achieve things and can fall prey to cheats. For example, many greedy fall prey to a cheat company as they fooled people that they will double money for double work. Greedy people infatuated by the offer, does not pay attention to all the information regarding the company, later on they found out that company was a fraud and they did extra work for no money.
So i think greed acts as more of a hindrance for achieving wealth as well as internal peace.
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...uccess and materilaistic things, but it do no benefit to their inner satisfaction....
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... they did extra work for no money. So i think greed acts as more of a hindrance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9595959596 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62478590962 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6102115386 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318771671487 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121959152675 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735345211521 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180542044908 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400376941418 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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