You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Dear Nazlı,
I hope you and your family are fine. I am sorry I haven’t written for three months. I have been so busy over these quarter. I am writing to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and took a new job recently.
As you know, I was responsible to measure credit risk of XY Bank whose market share is very small in banking sector. I had been stuck in the same position for a long and was not getting many chances to further my career. That’s why I changed to my job.
I find my new responsibilities in AB Bank which is the largest bank in Turkey. I am working to measure not only credit risk but also operational and market risk. Thus, I will have more business opportunities.
By the way, I am going to organize party to celebrate new job on this Saturday at my home. It woul be great if you have time to join in.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Başak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... haven't written for three months. I have been so busy over these quarter. I...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have been so busy over these quarter. I am writing to let you know that I have ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34857142857 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55623447553 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668571428571 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0496583984 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.3571428571 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197333161451 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657687037274 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595859458937 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1069574359 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491540482907 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.06 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.