Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues, such as environmental problems, that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?
The topic of spending money on space travel or allocation of funds on other problems has become a heated debate among authorities. Although many people assert that space travel is very important to explore new horizons, the others refute this proposal saying that there are many aggravated issues on which this money can be spent. This essay will discuss why we should spend the money wisely and reach a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, there are myriad of arguments which ascertain why the government should allocate money for other problems in which the most preponderant one is that this can be used to overcome environmental problems such as greenhouse gases impacts on the environment. This money can also be used to support the poor nations who are suffering from many issues. For instance, a study showed that about 80% of the people in world are poor and can be supported with money which developed countries waste on space travel. Thus, other problems are more important to solve rather the wasting money on unnecessary things.
On the other hand, there are also a group of people who support space travel due to many reasons in which the most effective one could be that space travel will explore many theories beneficial for humanity. Space travel also help to improve our weather conditions and environmental pattern by launching satellites. For example, a new survey revealed that worlds weather has been controlled just by taking and implementing data from satellites. Hence, it is proved that space travel is also important.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the spending of money for space travel and to resolve the wordly issues. Therefore, in my opinion, positive of spending money overweight its negatives and can be ignored at a substantial cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08843537415 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62755047003 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3879209861 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212431330259 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855364595116 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472980811787 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137000299841 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312950026576 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.