You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Write a letter to someone you know who live there. In your letter
ask them for help finding accommodation
tell them where you would like to live
tell them the type of place you are looking for
Dear Annie,
Hope you are doing fine. It’s been a while since we have written to each other. You will be glad to hear that I will move to London soon to take a job that I have been offered at Liberty Global. I will reach London in a few weeks.
As you know, I have never been to London and I am hoping you could help me in finding suitable accommodation. Though my company has arranged a studio apartment for the first two weeks, I will have to vacate the place after that.
My preference would be to live close to my workplace, which is in central London, as it would save a lot of time. If I could get something near the tube station and the marketplace, that would be great. I am mostly looking for a furnished studio apartment. If the studio apartment is not available, I would not mind sharing a flat with a girl. But the apartment should be spacious with good ventilation facility. My budget is around $1000 pound for the studio apartment and half of that for the shared room. Do you think I will get something in that budget?
I know you have a wide social circle there and would really appreciate your time to find me a suitable accommodation.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm wishes,
Preeti Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 438, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pound' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pounds'.
Suggestion: pounds
...ation facility. My budget is around 000 pound for the studio apartment and half of th...
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Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
... really appreciate your time to find me a suitable accommodation. Looking forward to meeting you so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48439264869 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574561403509 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8803917009 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.125 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240301124684 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765381619788 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677612823367 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150881159327 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315232524844 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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