Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. (Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree)
Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular in certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children’s health and such are not needed. This essay will argue/discuss why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks.
Parents have always been vary of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried about injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of children unfortunately reacting adversely to their injections. These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable diseases itself.
Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast number of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of deaths so far prevented far outweighs the number of children who have been adversely affected by the immunizations themselves. Some diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination campaigns. Overall the idea that vaccinations are unnecessary and dangerous is ill-informed and dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to far worse outcome the society.
This essay argued people who are against the vaccinations have a flawed understanding of vaccinations and underestimate the affects of what they believe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks. ...
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...al risks. Parents have always been vary of vaccinating their children. They are...
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...sary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21982758621 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21922165743 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556034482759 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8177978326 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2137143766 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830373765466 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307523213587 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138428723131 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398559210282 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.5 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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