The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland from 1960 to 1995.
The graph illustrates the number of someland’s people, suffering from X disease, over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that an increasing trend in the number of people, who had X disease, was seen until mid seventies, then this figure remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.
At the beginning of the period, a hundred people contracted X disease in this area. this condition was stable for next 5 years. Suddenly, someland experienced an explosive increase in X prevalence for a decade, with the number of infected people by this illness rising dramatically by 400 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the late 70s.
While no changes were not seen in this case between 1975 and 1980, a significant decrease was done from 1980 to 1990, with figures dropping to zero. someland did not record any cases of X disease during last five years and the disease disappeared in this area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iod of 35 years from 1960 to 1995. Overall, it is clear that an increasing ...
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..., before dropping to zero in 1990. At the beginning of the period, a hundre...
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...ople contracted X disease in this area. this condition was stable for next 5 years. ...
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Suggestion: Someland
...to 1990, with figures dropping to zero. someland did not record any cases of X disease d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69041764554 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.608213149 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300531077966 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130997589863 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124422892634 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186877632621 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130227318681 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.