The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced

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The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

The flowchart provide reveal information about the way of apple juice is produced.

Overall, there are 11 stages in whole of the producing process, beginning with the collected apple from farmland and ending with delivery of the juice to the consumers.

At the first step, the apples are collected from farmland. Then, washed, and sort based on the quality. A roller assist in this process. Apples are sliced by the grinder before delivery to the pressure machine in order to separate water from apple concentration. After that, a chemical substance called Aroma is added to concentration. The juice after the became filter in filtration machine is exposed to a temperature of 80°C in order to pasteurization.

In the subsequent stage, the bottles which are placed on the roller, filled by the pasteurized syrups. Finally, the apple juices are packed and then, delivered to the market for people consuming.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25675675676 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8129133898 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0467668316 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230411774304 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824685131872 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992143270693 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160716310972 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104068134717 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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