A movie producer sent the following memo to the head of the movie studio.
“We need to increase the funding for the movie Working Title by 10% in order to ensure a quality product. As you know, we are working with a first-time director, whose only previous experience has been shooting commercials for a shampoo company. Since the advertising business is notoriously wasteful, it stands to reason that our director will expect to be able to shoot take after take, without concern for how much time is being spent on any one scene. In addition, while we have saved money by hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors, this savings in salary will undoubtedly translate to greater expenditures in paying the actors and unionized crew overtime for the extra hours they will spend on the set waiting for the assistant directors and producers to arrange things. If we don’t get this extra money, the movie is virtually assured to be a failure.”
In accordance with the memo, there is need of 10 percent increment in funding to provide fees to the movie-staffs and actors. Since director and assistant producers, who are making the movie, are not well experienced, there will be extra money which can be provided to other crews and actors so that they can adjust to the ineptitude of the director and producers. The author claims that this extra money will make his movie success.Perhaps his movie will be success, but he has many holes in his assumptions to promptly conclude about the success of his movie in just a funding.
First of all, the author implies that for the success of a movie, there is no such role of directors and producers. Use of inexperienced directors and producers, even though funding is increased, the movie might lack some important aspects like proper direction , story play and etc which are very crucial to become any movie success in the theater. So, without providing higher wages to his recruits, he might invest it in finding more experienced directors and producers which can helps in making his movie success.
Secondly, through his memo, it is clear that there is lack of evidences. For example; to make a movie success, it might be very important about the story, graphical design and intended people on which this movie will be broadcasted. So, funding which is increased should be also employed in these factors which play a key role to become a success movie. For example; in this modern generation, not just investing on the actors and some crews, the budget should also be allocated to know people's expectation and current demands of the market which will aid in popularity of the movie.
Thirdly, it might be not be necessary just to increase funding to ensure quality products or increment of 10 percent might not be satisfactory to get the movie success. If there is well management in time and punctuality, additional budget might not be required just to stay for the crew and actors to adjust during play. So proper management of all aspects in movie making from story writing, acting , direction and producing etc, may prove that allocated need of funding be satisfactory. It might be reduced or increased as required.
In this way, the affirmation made by the author in the memo is based on fault assumptions and limited evidences. Further study should be done in various aspects of management and investment wisely for the success of the movie.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 418 350
No. of Characters: 1983 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.522 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.744 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.538 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.089 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing the movie, are not well experienced, there will be extra money which can be p...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...extra money will make his movie success.Perhaps his movie will be success, but he has m...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... important aspects like proper direction , story play and etc which are very cruci...
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Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... movie making from story writing, acting , direction and producing etc, may prove ...
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Line 7, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ection and producing etc, may prove that allocated need of funding be satisfacto...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay prove that allocated need of funding be satisfactory. It might be reduced or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 417.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88729016787 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6818746478 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455635491607 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2347263956 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 23.324526521 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204635850379 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806935031804 0.0743258471296 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574516773423 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122918658229 0.128457276422 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500442736724 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.