Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:suggest the places they can visitrecommend a place where they can stayoffer something you can do with them.

Essay topics:

Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter, you should:

suggest the places they can visit

recommend a place where they can stay

offer something you can do with them.

Hope you all are well, I would pleasure to meet your parents while they are in here.

Anuradhapura is a great place to visit a short holiday. There are many historic places and locations to see. I like to suggest, First place to visit “ Temple Tree,” which is the oldest tree with written history, annually thousand of pilgrims visiting this place. Then they can walk to “ Ruwanweliseya stupa,” it charming site in the afternoon. It has excellent mystery stories as well as the wonder of ancient engineering technology.

I would recommend the Hotel Honeybee is the right place to stay. There Safe, have a cozy room with air-conditioning, attached bathroom, lovely garden. The site is 10 min from the city center, next to bus route 856, taxis available, many groceries and restaurants are walking distance. The host is a kind and friendly old woman.

I will pick your parents at the Anuradhapura railway station to Hotel, also some guide-book and maps really useful. Keep on my mobile number. If there is any situation, I can reach. I am stopping now hope this is enough for now.

Good bless you.

Your friend,

Hasanka

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and locations to see. I like to suggest, First place to visit ' Temple Tree...
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... host is a kind and friendly old woman. I will pick your parents at the Anuradha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, then, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7546085019 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701030927835 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6907160787 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.125 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267434728717 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763815818947 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733728185816 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122204849146 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595006265639 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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