Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Nowadays, people's dietary habits have changed over the time. The place of eating is one of the factors. Some people would like to go to restaurants for meals, others prefer to eat meals at home. In my opinion, I like to eat meals at home.
First of all, it is healthier for people to eat meals at home frequently. In order to make food more delicious, cookers in restaurants always add more addition, which is not beneficial for people’s health. Besides, they always cook food with high oil and high sugar. On the contrary, if people often eat at home, they are able to add less addition and add less oil. Therefore, people who always eating at home can keep away from some diseases which caused by high oil and high sugar food. As a study shows, there are 50% people who eat in restaurants frequently died with diseases, such as high blood pressure and diabetes.
In addition, doing meals at home is a good way for people to release their pressure. Most of people suffer from depression because of the pressure from work and study. Therefore, people find many ways to relieve their stress and doing meals with family is one of a good way. That is because people can obtain a lot of funs when they cook meals by themselves. Besides, home is a better place for people to communicate with others than restaurant. So people can share their problems with others and get out of their stress while doing and eating meals.
Admittedly, there are many different kinds of delicious meals cooked by chefs in restaurants. There is no doubt that the food in restaurants is more delicious than food we cooked by ourselves. That is because chefs who learn about many cooking skills in restaurants are more professional. Moreover, there are more different types of food in restaurants. Hence, people can eat whatever kind of food they want.
In addition, the passage asserts that taxes of this kind are financially fair. However, the professor refutes this theory by stating this fact that there is a different way of thinking about fairness. Some people think the government does not take into account about income. It is unfair for people who have lower income. It is a great burden for people with small income than for those with higher income.
All in all, compared with having meals at restaurant, people can take more advantages of eating meals at home. I prefer to eat meals at home regularly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...y for people to release their pressure. Most of people suffer from depression because of the p...
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Line 13, column 23, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ting meals. Admittedly, there are many different kinds of delicious meals cooked by chef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76849642005 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4643065156 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45107398568 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5715005759 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3571428571 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9642857143 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46428571429 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398854086778 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120058668297 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119064653904 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223971649358 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125184785848 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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