You have arranged a meeting with a business partner Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner:
Explain the new arrangements.
Apologise for the changes.
Explain the reasons why the changes were needed.
Dear Mr. Collins,
I am writing to inform you to re-schedule our meeting, which was scheduled on coming Monday 11th November, due to urgency in my relative's home.
My uncle from South Sheilds met with an accident last night. I had to reach him at that moment as his son is in United States for official work and aunt already passed away. My cousin, uncle's son, called me at midnight and requested to reach to his father immediately owing to urgency of the matter. I reached to the hospital where my uncle is admitted today morning and the doctor said condition of patient is critical and a person from family needs to be with him at least for 3 days. After two days my cousin will return to South Sheilds and I will definitely reach by Friday to Leeds.
I am extremely sorry for the re-schedule of meeting. I know you fixed this meeting with my consent and you took off from your daily chores. But the situation is unavoidable and I have to delay this meeting. Hope you will understand my predicament.
As the Saturday is a public holiday, I believe you will be available at that time. I have made sure from my side to be in the meeting this time.
Kindly confirm whether you are comfortable for meeting on Saturday 16 November.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Collins, I am writing to inform you to re-schedul...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...the hospital where my uncle is admitted today morning and the doctor said condition of patien...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aturday 16 November. Yours sincerely, Patrick Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58951965066 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49645732093 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1854094786 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0714285714 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135613027295 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538100198227 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421421249837 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904204038919 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480464202263 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.