TPO-51 - Integrated Writing Task
Both the reading passage and the lecture argue about the behavior of elephant. The aouthor mention to the three ability of this huge mammals. However the professor finds all the idea dubious and present some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the author cliams that elephents can be aware of their death time so they going to near water to find a place to be alone die. while the lecturer challenges this ponit, he mention that due to their teeth have destroyed during time they need soft vegtable to eat so they choose the vvegetable in water. this phenomena caused to find elephant near water.
Secondly, the author asserts that elephants are artis and thay painting and also they can recognize somthings like flowers. On the other hand, lecturer refute this argument and thinks that they are just drow some line and haven't any idea about the concept since the trainer learn them by touching their ear to drow a line. so they couldn't be an artist.
Finally,the reading passage states that elephants fear from the Mice. in contrast the professor brings up the idea that they react to unfamilar animal nut just Mice.
To some up, the two prespective are differ to the ability of elephant which showed we need to scrutinized more presisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...the three ability of this huge mammals. However the professor finds all the idea dubiou...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... water to find a place to be alone die. while the lecturer challenges this ponit, he ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... the lecturer challenges this ponit, he mention that due to their teeth have destroyed ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...so they choose the vvegetable in water. this phenomena caused to find elephant near ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...so they choose the vvegetable in water. this phenomena caused to find elephant near ...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...getable in water. this phenomena caused to find elephant near water. Secondly, the au...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...s that they are just drow some line and havent any idea about the concept since the tr...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...m by touching their ear to drow a line. so they couldnt be an artist. Fina...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ching their ear to drow a line. so they couldnt be an artist. Finally,the readi...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ey couldnt be an artist. Finally,the reading passage states that elephants f...
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Line 11, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ates that elephants fear from the Mice. in contrast the professor brings up the id...
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Line 11, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...s that elephants fear from the Mice. in contrast the professor brings up the idea that t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 152, Rule ID: NUT_NOT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not'?
Suggestion: not
...dea that they react to unfamilar animal nut just Mice. To some up, the two prespe...
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Line 13, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
.... To some up, the two prespective are differ to the ability of elephant which showed...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202764977 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24124271174 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3479144673 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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