An increasing number of people suffering from health issues going to their modern lifestyle. The changing lifestyle is directly responsible for the deteriorating health. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give relevant examples and reasons.
Over past few years, lifestyle of people has changed. This trend severely affect the health of the people. Most of the people now, are struggling with chronic diseases. I agree with this notion, that changing lifestyle has great effect on the health of people There are some reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, today, life of the people have become easier than before, they doing their tasks with one click of a button thus they invite obesity, the cause of all diseases. In addition, many people do not have knowledge about healthy lifestyle, that is why these days, they have poor lifestyle choices, such as; smoking, overuse of alcohol, poor diet and stress. These are also the key contributors in the development and progression of chronic diseases. Furthermore, in this competitive world people are running behind money, they have lost their peace of mind and body, as a result they are caught by depression lile diseases. So, all these reasons are enough to prove that changing lifestyle leads degradation of health among the people.
Moreover, several useful ways are useful to overcome the problems occurred due to change in lifestyle. First, people can go for nutritional counselling, that includes in various ways to keep up the healthy diet. Second, physical exercise on the daily basis also helps us to improve our health. Further, people can learn the techniques of stress management to overcome the outcomes of heavy workload. Last but not least, government should start some programs related with the lifestyle change.
To conclude, in my point of view, changing lifestyle has bad effect on the health of the people, like, high level of stress, dangerous diseases and many more, but this can be handled with the help of exercise and good diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05084745763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46670678115 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3415004412 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187273761651 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637736293939 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038027790415 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116579928091 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340034710416 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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