People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In most situations, people have ultimate control on their behavior and decision making. As human being's, we determine our actions. we determine where we want to go, who we want to engage with, what we take in, and what we release into the world. There are however, forces and things that we can not control that impact our behavior, But our reaction to those foreces are largely determined by our own decision making. I do, however, believe that there are instances where people's behavior are impacted by astronomical forces cause by the moon and planets that change their decision making and mood.
Nikki Giovanni's poem "Choices" helps explain our ability to choose our reaction to forces that we can and can not control. She begins by saying "if i can't do what i want to do," describing the outsde forces we have no say in. If I want to ride a roller coaster on a rainy day, I literally can not becuase there are rules enforced at the amusement park preventing me from doing so. In this example, my physical behavior is controlled by the park's safety regulation. But my emotional behavior, my reaction, and my response and choice of what I'll do next is not. Nikki Giovani continues by saying "my job is not to do what i don't want to do" reenforcing my belief that we, as humans, control what we do.
Outside forces impact people's behavior. For instance, Rainy days often lead to people staying inside. We can't control the weather, but the weather effects our day. We may become sleepier or sad or angry because the weather isn't warm and delightful. The weather may change our plans for the day. But again, we have ultimate control on if we want to continue with our day outside or remain positive despite the weather change.
One specific way that the weather changes people's behavior is Seasonal Affective Disorder. It's said that during the winter and in colder and darker cities, people have depression symptoms because of the lack of sun. Another example of an outside force that we can not control is the moon and plants. Many people believe that a full moon or Mercury Retrogade affects the behahviors of people because of the gravitational pull on the water make-up in our body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...human beings, we determine our actions. we determine where we want to go, who we w...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... control. She begins by saying 'if i cant do what i want to do,' descri...
^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ontrol. She begins by saying 'if i cant do what i want to do,' describing ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...egins by saying 'if i cant do what i want to do,' describing the outsde...
^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ing 'if i cant do what i want to do,' describing the outsde forces we have n...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ion, and my response and choice of what Ill do next is not. Nikki Giovani continues...
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Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... and my response and choice of what Ill do next is not. Nikki Giovani continues by...
^^
Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...saying 'my job is not to do what i dont want to do' reenforcing my belief ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...often lead to people staying inside. We cant control the weather, but the weather ef...
^^^^
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ier or sad or angry because the weather isnt warm and delightful. The weather may ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 28.8173652695 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7974025974 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55335904947 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516883116883 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9075756631 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9523809524 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.70786347227 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994706857289 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421664559244 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460213891663 0.0701772020484 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694971222543 0.128457276422 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430477923276 0.0628817314937 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.