Write a letter to a friend to inform him/her about a job opening in your company.
Describe the job;
1) write about the job.
2) How is it suitable for your friend?
3) How to apply for the job.
Dear George,
How are you doing? Hope you are enjoying your newly married life. I am writing this to give you some information about the new job opening related to the stream which you are presently working on. In our last conversation also you have mentioned me that you're looking for a job change.
This current opening is all about maintaining the networking infrastructure properly, taking regular backups, tracking the schedule jobs and other minor activities every technical engineer will be working on. Along with that you may also need to visit data centers quite often because it is required for deployments and other enhancements. You don't need to worry about the difficulties you may face while moving the latest code changes to the server because, at those times a programmer might accompany you.
I am quite sure this job will surely suits your work nature as well as keeping your experience in mind. When we both are working in the same organization, I remember you were working on the same platform as current profile offers. I know you are very open-minded to support others in case of network failures and supporting from office in case of night shifts without hesitation.
To apply for this job, you may need to click on the referral link mailed to you separately this morning. Once the page opens you also need to give your basic details along with your personal identification and can complete by uploading your updated resume in the following page. Make sure to give your mobile number and can mention your messenger number as well if it is different. You will receive a notification once they scrutinize your profile and may call you for a face to face interview. I hope you will make through the process and we become colleagues again.
Thanks,
John.
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| 2019-11-10 | feroz121 | 84 | view |
| 2018-08-07 | sai.varadula | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...rsation also you have mentioned me that youre looking for a job change. Thi...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me that youre looking for a job change. This current opening is all about mainta...
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Line 9, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...deployments and other enhancements. You dont need to worry about the difficulties yo...
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Line 13, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
... I am quite sure this job will surely suits your work nature as well as keeping you...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61010771991 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 290.88556701 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222630646953 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787189864103 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064886532569 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153616785246 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694311991487 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.