Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：For a business to be successful, people must spend a lot of money on advertising.
advertisement is playing a more essential role in the society. Whether it is a necessery prerequisite for the business to be successful is a popular topic nowadays. some people think that company shouldn’t spend a lot of money on advertisements and others hold different opinion. In my opinion, it is necessery for a company to spend plenty of money to advertise their business, especially when the following points are considered.
To begin with, for new companies, advertising is a great way of propaganda. By spend money on advertisements, the company can let people know their business and buy their products. oppo, a leading mobile device company in the world, is a good example to illustrate this point. oppo used to be a small company which produce phones as their main business. Their phone is very cheap and has a relatively good quality. however, nobody knows this company because it used to be lack of propaganda. In 2014, a talent show called “I Am a Singer” became popular in the east Asia. Then, the company spent around 20 million us dollar in order to be the only sponsor of this TV program and advertise their new phones on the show. after that, a huge amount of people are acquainted with this company and the company gained a lot of customers and a lot of fans. Now, it becomes one of the top 5 company who produce cellphone.
Furthermore, if a company has already become famous, spend money on advertisements is still able to let the company get much more attention than it used to be. Since they have got a lot of potential customers, the cost they spend on advertisements can be neglected compare with the people who buy their stuff after seeing the advertisements. which, of course, could let the company earn more and become more successful. According to the survey given by M’cdonald, when they put the advertisement of their new burger in china Central Televition, they cost 5 million us dollar and their income gains 5 percent. Even though it seems not to be a big number, but consider their total income everyday in china is around 200 million us dollars per day, they actually earn 10 million more just in a single day!
Admittedly, some people may think that the advertisement is annoying and stop buying the item, which reduce the daily sale of the company. however, if the advertisements are interesting and made in high quality, there wouldn’t be too much people get annoyed by the advertisements.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, I firmly believe that spend more money on advertising is a efficient way to make the business successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87248322148 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95317774645 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501118568233 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7379070021 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194016051744 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663025025298 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570871630782 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125726752557 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466633140432 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.