Torreya taxifoha
The reading passage states that the torreya trees in north Forida are facing the danger of extinction and it suggests some ideas to save them. However, the professor in the lecture casts doubts on the points made in the reading and find them unsatisfactory.
First, considering the article, an option is to reproduce torreya in the same location it was before which is microclimate. In cotrast, the professor in the lecture contradits the idea and further explains that microclimate in the northern part of Florida has been recently changed due to global warming and drained plants. Therefore, it will be no longer suitable for torreya trees to live there.
Second, the reading puts forward the idea to relocate these trees to a new environment, cooler and seem to be more suitable for them. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture exemplifies the consequences of a similar decision happened before to Black Locas tree. this new tree killed other plants living in new envirnment which many of them had been in the danger of distinction. So the results of this idea are unpredictable and uncontrolable.
Third, reading passage claimes that torreya trees can be preserved in research centers where it is easier to be protected and examined. On the other hand, the speaker finds this idea not infeasible. She adds that the population of trees should be far more than the capacity of research centers in order to survive possible diseases. A large diversity of genes between trees is necessary to help them resist diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...on happened before to Black Locas tree. this new tree killed other plants living in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, as to, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76448615453 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5888721079 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878058385003 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346759221298 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523426661843 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630722408263 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453620201949 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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