Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Increase in the urban population has promoted the trend of living in apartments. Life in these tall buildings is somewhat different from that in houses but it has its own advantages and disadvantages. I disagree with the concept that it increases loneliness and sadness. In the upcoming paragraphs I will be discussing pros and cons of living in residential buildings.
Life in apartments is dependent upon the occupants more than the building’s height. People have the opportunity to meet people from different vicinities and socialize on regular basis as they get to see each other a lot more and easily, like going up and down using elevators and escalators, you get a chance to know people living around you and befriend them. Mostly people living in the neighbor are also alone away from their families so they are more likely to welcome new people in their life. This provides with a possibility of increasing the social circle and learning about the values and norms, giving a chance to increase the knowledge and understand the differences in people from different areas.
Every picture has two sides. Discussing the drawbacks of apartment life, amongst the biggest concerns is privacy related. Movement of people coming and going to meet the residents make it a public place more than residential one. Large number of people belonging to different ethnicities and races brings in new diseases making residents exposed to the contaminated environment. Crowdedness and noise are also a factor of this lifestyle.
To sum up the discussion, the pros of living in apartment out way the cons. However, reforms could be made to increase the human interaction by organizing meetings and activities to involve the residents and giving them a platform to communicate. Huge apartment buildings are necessary for the ever increasing amount of people in city life to save land and to provide reasonable living to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88924818976 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2745994906 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133303190367 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426960074416 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274295573873 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804565220987 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173432232734 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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