You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothingfrom the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase
and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear sir/ Madam
I am writing this letter to enquire about the progress on complaint i made two weeks ago regarding the suitcase i lost last week, while traveling with Oman Air. I immediately reported it to the concerned authorities and haven’t heard from them yet. I did not find my auitcase on the luggage belt, it might have been mixed with someone else’s belongings and hence I couldn’t find it.
It was a black leather suitcase with two buckles on it’s front side and a “Clair” company logo pn its right bottom. My suitcase contained a lot of important things including my work documents and my professional certifications. The work relAted documents are of an ongoing project and are confindential. It would be highly appreciated by me and my company, if they are recovered as soon as possible without being revealed. Moreover, the suitcase has some of my prettiest and expensive clothes that i were planning on wearing to a close friend’s wedding next week, hence their recovery is also needed timely.
Since i made the complaint a week ago, i would like to hear an update on what the company is doing in order to retrieve my suitcase. Oman Air is famous for its quick and quality services and I really hope that it would live up to it’s reputation and my expectations.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly
Aqsa Afzal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...complaint i made two weeks ago regarding the suitcase i lost last week, while tra...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s and haven't heard from them yet. I did not find my auitcase on the luggage...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...two buckles on it's front side and a 'Clair' company logo pn its r...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...my prettiest and expensive clothes that i were planning on wearing to a close fri...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97890295359 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98931375472 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662447257384 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1741631998 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155698794043 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517564768776 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315515470288 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836123741412 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285703741809 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.