Today, the life expectancy of people is much higher than before. Some people
think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforce. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
t is irrefutable that average lifespan of human beings has increased with the advancement in
medicine, leading to new discoveries and treatments, every day. I agree with the given
statement that the elderly people should continue to work till a later age. I shall support my
point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, looking at it from a country’s economic point of view, increasing the retirement age will
help decrease the government’s burden on providing benefits for the elderly. For developing
countries this is very beneficial, as the workforce will contribute towards the country’s economy
and the government will need to spend lesser on providing the retirement benefits to the senior
citizens, such as senior citizen discounts, healthcare benefits, travel benefits, etc.
Moreover, working till a later age will be very beneficial to the elderly, at an individual level.
They will not need to depend on anyone for their needs. Also, they’ll be busy and involved in
work, which will help tackle the old-age problems of loneliness and depression. These days the
family members do not have the time to spend with the old members of the family, which leads
the elderly to feel isolated. Increasing the retirement age will, to a great extent, reduce this
problem.
The opponents of this view believe that the old are not physically fit for much of the stressful
work. Some also say that since they have worked all their lives, it’s the time for them to enjoy
the later years of life, away from the pressures of work. I, however, believe that to enjoy in the
later years too, money is needed. So, even if they work for fewer hours, it is a necessity.
Overall, a increase in the retirement age, will benefit the country, society as well as individuals.
Voluntary retirement offers can be set up for those who wish to retire early, due to their health
or other circumstances.
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Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
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Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
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Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
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flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.51 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.