Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. What are the reasons for this and is it a positive or negative trend?
It is true that many youngsters waste hours and hours on playing computer games, neglecting sports and physical activities. I believe that there are some significant reasons for this trend, which is in my opinion a totally negative one.
I would argue that there are two principal reasons for the fact that a growing number of children are addicted to computer games. Firstly, the migration of people from rural to urban areas has resulted in an enormous increase in demand for housing so almost land fund has been used to build apartment blocks instead of playgrounds or stadiums. As the limitation of the space for outdoor activities, youngsters have to play indoor and computer games are ones of the most popular options for them. Secondly, parents are busier and busier, and to have more time to complete housework or relax after a tired working day, they send their offspring a smart phone or laptop to play themselves. Obviously, day by day, the kids are becoming game addicts.
Computer games have negative effects on both physical and mental health of teenagers. When youngsters keep their eyes glue to screens for several hours, whereas they need to take regular exercise, waves from computers and Wi-Fi devices may cause headaches. This sedentary lifestyle is also the main culprit of serious diseases likes heart attack, obesity… Furthermore, the social development of children who widely use internet and spend this time on computer games is low while their social anxiety level and aggression behavior are found to be high. As a result, It is very difficult for them to build a strong relationship with their fellows.
In conclusion, there are some reasons could be the explanation for the addiction of children on computer games and I consider that this brings about serious negative influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60392325663 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2579758389 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322710254154 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106782585946 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628323392721 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197389991334 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016123791524 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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