Today, no doubt, the e-commerce business is sprawling/sweeping around the globe because people are becoming more and more shopaholics/its universal popularity. It is often said that it is putting some negative impact on youngsters. While others assert that it is a boon for every individual, In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain its pros and cons into the limelight of my robust views before reaching the final verdict.
There are some advantages of online shopping which may not be overlooked at any cost. First glaring advantage of this is that a person can easily explore any products in term of categories. However, he also can compare the price to other online sites which may claim to offer cheapest and convenient quality on a reasonable MRP. In contrast, it is not feasible in shopping centers when you are on the prowl of specific products. Moreover, as per this adage “A closed mouth catches no flies.” Because, sometimes, customers feel weird to put frequently questions to the shopkeepers; as a result, they remain deprived of the selection the item. Secondly, you need not at all to visit any shopping malls while it can be done with the single click on touched smartphones whether you are on the journey or sitting in the coziness of your drawing room because these smart devices have become ubiquitous elsewhere. Apart from this, a good illustration may help to elucidate how it is more beneficial for those who suffer from any kinds of disability or having no ride. These needy people may also fulfil their pent-up desires through online shopping. For this purpose, these online sites are known dexterous for their door to door fast and reliable delivery services.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case of its dark sides. Perhaps people hear to say after accounted it setbacks that these internet sites snoop their accounts in order to snatch the information that is why, some people do still see this negatively. However, if it can be considered right for a while but, would the importance of technical devices gainsay? The answer is no. For an instant, although, these cellphones add to criminal activities, yet, we all have been adopted it as part and parcel of our life since they come into being. Therefore, in my point of view “there is no garden without weeds.” We cannot deny online shopping’s benefits, and even these are pet peeves of our life.
To the culmination of the above discussion depicts that the people are radically latched onto online shopping. This trend has become a lucrative business for consumers and customers, and it makes fully ensure to satisfy both sides. Overall, it has a good positive aspect rather than negative.
Today, no doubt, the e-commerce business is sprawling around the globe because people are becoming more and more shopaholics/its universal popularity.
However, unfortunately, if a customer has any grumble items or delivery process, they have a tremendous pragmatic approach for this; otherwise, they are reliable for reimbursement of customers’ pocket money. It is so lest the customers should not be shunned/jaded.
I don’t think it is hard to learn about anything, even an English language while it has become obnoxious for very many people what the reason behind it is? Perhaps the main reason why people find it so challenging to acquire its profound sentence structure. Firstly, maybe no one wants to kick off of their comfort zone; otherwise, it can quickly obtain because it is scattered to the four winds whether it comes on our threshold in the way of newspaper or pop up on our smartphone’s screen through advertisement. These activities are teeming with their knowledge what is here that makes it easier to learn it. It might be a good ability, sensitive approach or conscious mind. The combination of these things can solve its puzzle. For this purpose, you must have a keen eye which may able to abstract it transparently. Our every action is beset around it.
Online shopping has a treasure trove of all kinds of things; it means you can choose whatever you need.
today, no doubt, the e-commerce business is sprawling/sweeping around the globe because people are becoming more and more shopaholic/its universal popularity. it is often said that it is putting some negative impact on youngsters. while others assert that it is a boon for every person, In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain its pros and cons into the limelight of my robust views before reaching the final verdict.
there are some advantages of online shopping which may not be overlooked at any cost. First glaring advantage of this is that a person can easily explore any products in term of categories. however, he also can compare the price to other online sites which may claim to offer cheapest and convenient quality on a reasonable MRP. In contrast, it is not feasible in shopping centres when you are on the prowl of specific products. Moreover, as per this adage “A closed mouth catches no flies.” because, sometimes, customers feel weird to put often questions to the shopkeepers; as a result, they remain deprived of the choice the item. Secondly, you need not at all to visit any shopping malls while it can be done with the single click on touched smartphones whether you are on the journey or sitting in the cosiness of your drawing-room because these smart devices have become ubiquitous elsewhere. Apart from this, a good illustration may help to elucidate how it is more beneficial for those who suffer from any kinds of disability or having no ride. these needy people may also fulfil their pent-up desires through online shopping. For this purpose, these online sites are known dexterous for their door to door fast and reliable delivery services.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case of its dark sides. perhaps people hear to say after accounted it setbacks that these internet sites snoop their accounts in order to snatch the information that is why some people do still see this negatively. however, if it can be considered right for a while but, would the importance of technical devices gainsay? The answer is no. For an instant, although, these cellphones add to criminal activities, yet, we all have been adopted it as part and parcel of our life since they come into being. Therefore, in my point of view “there is no garden without weeds.” we cannot deny online shopping’s benefits, and even these are pet peeves of our life.
To the culmination of the above discussion depicts that the people are radically latched onto online shopping. this trend has become a lucrative business for consumers and customers, and it makes fully make sure to satisfy both sides. Overall, it has a good positive aspect and not negative.
today, no doubt, the e-commerce business is sprawling around the globe because people are becoming more and more shopaholic/its universal popularity.
however, unfortunately, if a customer has any grumble items or delivery process, they have a tremendous pragmatic approach for this; otherwise, they are reliable for reimbursement of customers’ pocket-money. it is so lest the customers should not be shunned/jaded.
I don’t think it is hard to learn about anything, even an English language while it has become obnoxious for very many people what the reason behind it is? perhaps the main reason people find it so challenging to acquire its profound sentence structure. Firstly, maybe no one wants to kick off their comfort zone; otherwise, it can quickly get because it is scattered to the four winds whether it comes on our threshold in the way of newspaper or pop up on our smartphone’s screen through advertisement. these activities are teeming with their knowledge what is here that makes it easier to learn it. it might be a good ability, sensitive approach or conscious mind. The combination of these things can solve its puzzle. For this purpose, you must have a keen eye which may able to abstract it transparently. our every action is beset around it.
online shopping has a treasure trove of all kinds of things; it means you can choose whatever you need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, in contrast, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 24.0651302605 349% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3446.0 1615.20841683 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 680.0 315.596192385 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06764705882 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10654576214 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8791755446 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 361.0 176.041082164 205% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530882352941 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1085.4 506.74238477 214% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 5.43587174349 423% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5720813837 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.424242424 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6060606061 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290763002637 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792024916997 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164556517281 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19869375618 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.265515670835 0.056905535591 467% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 78.4519038076 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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