You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
- where you went
- what you saw there
- how you felt about it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? I am writing this letter to share the wonderful experience I had when I visited a museum during my trip to Singapore.
Last month, I along with my family planned our one-week holiday to Singapore which is a small island. It is not only famous for being the cleanest country in the world but also has many famous tourist attractions such as Universal Studios, Singapore Flyer and Gardens by the Bay. We had great fun there enjoying the exotic seafood, shopping, and Singapore cruise.
We visited the National Museum of Singapore on the sixth day. Initially, I thought that it’s going to be monotonous but to my surprise, I was astounded by the architectural beauty of the museum. Moreover, it was humongous and the nation’s oldest museum that depicted the history of Singapore from the 14th century in a story-telling approach with Images and film projected on its 15-meter high cylindrical walls.
As you know in my school days, I used to hate studying history but after visiting the museum I developed a keen interest in exploring the historical events of other countries as well. It was an enlightening trip where we developed an understanding of the history of Singapore with so much ease.
I would recommend you to plan a trip to Singapore with your family and do visit the National Museum of Singapore. I hope you all will enjoy there.
Hope to see you soon, Take care.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Children in some parts of the world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. Some people think this as a positive change; however, others think of it as a neg 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake care. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88353413655 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78507613654 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0238048016 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201698244049 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757142264558 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715838325513 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129648176229 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938739385084 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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