Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Roaming across the globe has become very popular presently. Some believe that it creates conflicts between people belonging to different parts of the world. I totally agree with this viewpoint and in my essay, I will discuss my thoughts by using examples of dressing, religion, and language.
Currently, traveling around the world is becoming very popular. Youths love to visit different countries to get more insight into other culture and their lifestyles. On the other hand, they find it difficult to convey their thoughts to natives because of the language barrier. Like Germans use to speak german, which is not spoken worldwide and people from other parts of the world find it difficult to survive there. Which in turn, creates clashes in their understanding. A recent study has been done by the Universal tourism community, which states that around 76% of tourists find it burdensome to travel with the one who belongs to other religions.
The crowd loves to explore foreign nations to explore more about the outfit whey wear and religion they support. Different countries have a variety of apparel options. Like in the East part of the world most of the people follow Islam, which does not allow them to wear western clothes. On the other hand, Universal travelers have their wearing lifestyle and when they visit the temples or any religious place without the proper outfit can be considered as playing with the feelings of natives.
To conclude, Universal exploration can never be enjoyed if the public shares the same platform of thoughts and understanding with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13026819923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51966910578 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.703786992 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134095494448 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474141546544 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461790658365 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841619738147 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426459797988 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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