In many places,new homes are needed,but the only space available for building them is in the country side.Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this ?
It is an irrefutable fact that in present time population has touched new heights.It is believed by some folks that it is pivotal to protect the countryside and not make new houses there.I agree with the notion to a large extent and ideas to strengthen my viewpoints are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To embark on,the first idea which goes against this idealogy is that population is thriving with a great pace and there are no separate places left in the town for making houses.As a matter of fact,houses are imperative for humanbeings for survival at earth.As a result,houses can develop in the place of outer areas.
On the flip side,there is a plethora of reasons which makes me to support this approach.Firstly, countryside area includes the lots of trees and greenery of the earth.Infact,these plants and trees are also played the indispensable role in everyone's life as they generate oxygen for survival.To epitomise,trees and plants tackle the effect of global warming and create the balance between the weathers.Thus,these are pertinent for world.Secondly ,
due to this destruction of outer areas can hamper the life of several birds and animals.To exemplify, one survey was conducted in Kerala which showed 38% of birds species were deceased due to urbanization in 2016 .Hence , some of them are even endangered due to this.
To recapitulate, although houses are essential for humans yet plants and trees are also more important and abolished country side also major reason of death of birds and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20003999975 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.68663813 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.0 106.682146367 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142222907381 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862280300243 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303262091344 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750034601282 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337277546112 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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...time population has touched new heights.It is believed by some folks that it is pi...
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...untryside and not make new houses there.I agree with the notion to a large extent...
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...aces left in the town for making houses.As a matter of fact,houses are imperative ...
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...e for humanbeings for survival at earth.As a result,houses can develop in the plac...
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...ere deceased due to urbanization in 2016 .Hence , some of them are even endangered...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20003999975 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.68663813 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.0 106.682146367 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142222907381 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862280300243 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303262091344 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750034601282 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337277546112 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.