Vaccination children against preventable disease is unnecessary and dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some section of people argue that vaccination is harmful for the offspring, while other believe that it is best way to irradiate the disease. Vaccination has more advantage despite of some disadvantage, which may neglect.
To embark with, vaccines tackle several diseases namely chickenpox, hepatitis A and B and so on. It is responsibility of parents that they definitely vaccinated the children to counter several disease. In present time, most of all parents are aware about importance of vaccines, so they protect them. In addition, government has started a project from last ten years, their aim is that to mitigate these serious disease from the root by vaccination and they became successful in this project. According to the world health organization report the India is only national which has completely demolish the polio from root.
Moreover, in recent years, the infant mortality rate has been constantly decrease, due to the people awareness and government effort with help of vaccines. Furthermore, vaccines also protect offspring from disease which other children had. For instance, if infant had chickenpox than it is possible that it spread among other infants.
However, some time vaccination have adverse effects on them that may not neglected. There are several examples are available, which describe that vaccines had negative impact on them, because of outdated vaccines or the method of injecting vaccine is wrong. For instance , in Africa when the doctors had vaccinated expired vaccines them than many children had died.
In conclusion, vaccination have effect adversely but the outcome is more positive
than negative. In my opinion, vaccination play indispensable role to counter serious disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51492537313 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82726402568 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3802268753 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145335976094 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556701947705 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441447947225 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732906281173 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282977804948 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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